| vee_ess |
03-07-2005 01:32 PM |
Well, to be completely honest, Jason425 is correct about the grammar. Just looking at the first sentence, what is written is:
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I have seen in the past 10 years all manner of portable computing devices from the Palm, Windows CE, and the ever so doomed Apple Newton. Each had its finer points and usefulness but at the end of the day I always needed a PC to get the real jobs done. Every business professional uses some sort of organizer or handheld PDA to record information and keep schedules, but once again at the end of the day even these professionals come back to the office or home and sync the device with full computer to retain the information and get the real work done.
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What would be correct is:
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I have seen, in the past 10 years, all manners of portable computing devices from the Palm to Windows CE to the ever-so-doomed Apple Newton. Each had their finer points and usefulnesses, but, at the end of the day, I have always needed a PC to get the real jobs done. Every business professional uses some sort of organizer or handheld PDA to record information and keep schedules, but, once again, at the end of the day, even these professionals come back to the office or home and sync the device with full computer to retain the information and get the real work done. [run-on]
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The thing to consider is that few people will notice. I have seen very few online reviews and articles that are grammatically correct. This can be gotten away with, however, because most people have to concentrate on the grammar or spelling to notice minor errors. In comparison to reviews from other sites, this review (at least the front page) is not too bad. It's not like any other article from here has been any better. |
