I just lookd it over to see what was missing again - and it comes down to 2 things - more color or something to make it look like more than a word document (probably comes mostly from lack of color)
As a reader I would like to see more personal thoughts or opinions, or what the chip means to the reader and the industry, other than was seemed to be just 5 pages of specs/pics and benchmarks. (not counting the OC and conclusion pages)
In the end, it comes down to presentation; The reader has to be entertained past just the content if you want to keep them hooked.
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